Sunday, April 12, 2009

The Last Stand

Breathe again, Breathe please!
You need to live to save another.
Breathe like the northern cold winds,
And shine like an everlasting light.

The remains Of the day are flying motionless,
Towards the Flames beyond the Cold Mountain.
Where they will burn into nothing at all,
And All that remains will be ashes.

How froths the angry Ocean in pain,
When the wind brings word of harm.
The mighty black moon is weeping,
And the unforgiving winter is turning warm.

With you shall die the winds of rain,
And dead shall be the rain clouds.
The mist unfolds a morning gray,
And water falls from rainless clouds.

The morning sun has died with you,
And the night envelopes the morning light.
The white sun weeps and closes it's eyes,
And the rain stops forever....

8 comments:

  1. inspired by the instrumental song The Flames Beyond The Cold Mountain by the band Mono

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  2. Wo0o0o0!!

    Nice poem.. Can picturize the lines clearly!

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  3. -Psst. This is Rachel.

    -Psst
    This is beautiful.

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  4. What a remarkable sad and touching poem ! \o0/

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  5. This is something else!

    I can see the light-less moon, I can feel the acid rain!

    I can see the water falling from rainless clouds.

    And the morning sun has already died!


    Exceptional write!

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